janaza jo nikla humara wahan se...
roshan thi us ki gali , phool the bikhre wahan pe......
ek mehfil saji thi , saqi aur pila apni ankhon se ......
.....goonj suni jo hum ne wahan pe......
ro kar chal diye hum wahan se...
sukoon na mila jate waqt bhi is jahan mein.....
kaya tune , ai rab socha that likhte waqt taqdeer humari...
rehm na aya tujh ko rula diya hume jate jate !
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...abhi na jaao chhod kar, ki dil abhi bhara nahi...what a wonderful poem Alka! I'd say it's not only that your writing is elevating, it appears that YOU are evolving!
ReplyDeletehmmm :)... thank u soooo much amit !
Deleteincredible lines Alka!!!
ReplyDeletethank you elvira !
DeleteWOW..........This one is fantastic.
ReplyDeletethank you shamsood !
Deletewow!!! beautiful !!!!
ReplyDeletethank you himanshu !
DeleteAlka Ji..beautiful lines....
ReplyDeletethank you sooo much seema !
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ReplyDeletethank you sujatha !
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sukoon na mila jate waqt bhi is jahan se...wow so intense. Very nice alka.
ReplyDeleteso touchy lines :( reminded me of my friend ......... thanks
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